The image above is an example of Satire because, the author criticizes Obama’s
choices with spending the U.S money. Obama is spending way too much and not on
the right things. The cartoon tells you that by emphasizing the money in the “fatty
foods” making the man really fat and unhealthy. Then, the author ties in
Michelle Obama’s Nutrition campaign by making Obama say, “Whatever you do, don’t
let Michelle see you!” Which shows Obama not really helping or following what
he says, or Michelle says. This cartoon is Horatin Satire. The author
tries to let people know his view of the bad decisions Obama is making and turns
his message in a witty humorous way. Some elements of Satire the author uses
is: Irony [verbal], hyperbole, Innuendo, and farce.
Sunday, March 15, 2015
Wednesday, January 7, 2015
Song writer Helps Kids Summon Courage to stop bullies By: Krista Ramsey
The article was sharing a man, Keenan West a songwriter goes on a national tour to different schools talking about stopping bullies. He makes songs and shows kids at assemblies and also shows stories of different kids that have been bullied which inspires lots of other high schoolers to stop bullying as well.
URL to the article: Song Writer Helps Kids Summon Courage to Stop Bullies
Best written lines:
" Now the gym has become as quiet and still as an SAT testing sit. As West describes instances of cyber-bullying and intimidation, some students' heads go down, perhaps in a moment of self-examination. Other students – some seated apart from their peers – show keen interest, as if West were telling their story."
It's the best written line because, Krista creates humor in the sentences even though it's a serious topic. When she applies humor to the sentences it also creates a stronger effect and helps connect the reader to Krista's thoughts and emotions. These sentences also tell the reader to start thinking about their life and choices they've made. These words really impact the reader, it has good diction as well. The words are wisely chosen to give a better impact to the reader and carry out the message clearly.
Ramsey writes in a persuasive method, influencing the reader to support her opinions. She is a great argumentative writer. She also has great use of syntax and diction. In her article, For better vision,
kids need time outdoors, she exclaims "But before parents claw back the iPhones, experts say that the
problem may not lie in the technology itself, but the amount of time spent on it, the environment in which it's used and the activities its replacing." This shows how well Ramsey can persuade an audience by stating an issue but also a solution or suggestion. Also, in Super Bowl QB's score points for great style, Ramsey shows that the style of words give a great meaning and can wrap it into a good present. " In fact, it's interesting how often the best turned-out person in the room has one of the lowest salaries." In Song writer helps kids summon courage to stop bullies, Ramsey writes, "Now the gym has become as quiet and still as an SAT testing site." This shows that she also wrote in a way that makes you feel like your there, at the event.
If I were able to meet Krista Ramsey, I would ask her 3 questions:
1) How did you start your career as a columnist?
2) When did you get the passion to write?
3) What's your favorite topic to write in for an article?
Sunday, December 14, 2014
We Were Liars: Part 2
I started continued to read the book We Were Liars and
the main character has it worse. After the accident, she has this brain issue
where she forgets everything and asks the same question over and over again.
All her loved ones think she’s crazy and stays away from her. She is isolated
from everyone. She feels like she has no purpose to life. So she slowly gives
each one of her belongings away until she has nothing so when she dies, she
doesn't need to give anything to her family.
I feel
the desperation and loneliness of the main character. The author writes the
emotions of the main character very well. You can connect to the character and
feel empathy because she turns the character into a real human. The way she
brings the character to life with realistic problems is amazing. That is a
great way to connect with the reader. It helps the reader hook on to the book.
The main
character sees well in the world, but she thinks she doesn't belong because
everyone tells her she can’t. I have attached an article showing how teenagers
get lonely and how suicide is what they look on doing as their next course of
action like main character in this book is deciding.
Saturday, December 13, 2014
We Were Liars
I have finished all my mandatory 3 books. For my own choice
book, I read If I Stay. For my second book, a genre normally don’t read,
I read The Watcher. Finally for my non-fiction, I read The Sea of
Tranquility. (By far my favorite book) Now I am starting a new book called We
Were Liars. I heard it was a good book and I have only read 3-4 pages in
the book and I can already see lots of foreshadowing.
It’s
about a girl who doesn’t really fit in with her family. Her dad left her a year
ago and before he left, he shot her right in the chest. She was always a daddy’s
girl, so see her very own father shoot her in their front lawn broke her heart.
She now can’t trust anyone and feels like no one loves her. When she was
bleeding out in her front lawn her mother came and didn’t show any empathy. Her
mother just said, Don’t cause a scene. Go
inside and suck it up. Ever since then, she is lifeless.
That’s
all I have read in the book and if I were in her shoes, I would be scared. I
would run away or even do worse things. I can already tell she is a very strong
person because she puts a mask on her face and acts like she’s okay but in
reality, she no one loves her, not even her family. She hides lots of her
emotions and if a character has that trait it proves that she is strong and
selfless. It’s so sad to read through her struggles and hopefully it gets
better for her in the end.
Book Trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R5yMYlVM7Vk
Thursday, November 20, 2014
The Best of Me
This week I read The Best of Me
By: Nicholas Sparks. I actually finished this book in a week as well. It’s
about a couple, Dawson Cole and Amanda Collier. They both went through hard
paths in high school. They fall madly in love and promise each other they would
never leave each other. Well, they were wrong. The time came, senior year, the
hardest decision of their life came. The ended up splitting up and separating the
paths. Many years later, when they both are middle aged, (45) a very close
friend of theirs Tuck, died. His last request was for both of them to come
back. When they came back the memories come flooding back and they “re-fall” in
love again within a matter of days.
To find out more (the ending) and
more specific details, I highly suggest you pick this book up and start reading
it! It’s the cutest book you will ever read.
The Best
of Me, taught me a valuable lesson. Everyone has second chances in life.
You get a second chance in life, not just love. I think that’s very important
to understand. You shouldn’t give up just because it didn’t work the first
time, brush it off, and try again
.
“The truth is, the world
isn't easy for any of us. It never has been and it never will be.”
― Nicholas Sparks, The Best of Me
― Nicholas Sparks, The Best of Me
Stepping
up and trying to make the best of things is another lesson I learned from this
book. There are so many hidden lessons weaved into the book that you need to
notice in close detail. My favorite part of the book was when, meeting each
other 20 years later. The amount of detail Dawson and Amanda remember of each
other is amazing. It shows how special their connection is and showcases that
they have true love.
Trailer to the Movie: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e0a_EF5PMYc
Sunday, November 16, 2014
The One: The Selection
I started to read the book The
One: The Selection Series and actually finished the book in less than a
week. Do you know when you read a book and no matter what you can’t stop
reading it? Well this book did that to me. I read the book till 2 in the
morning every day until I finished it and was satisfied. The book and series
had a good ending and I felt like it was well written and didn’t “rip me off”
like other authors have done to their series that I have read. I was content
and left with mixed emotions like every author should.
This book/ series where there was a
system to pick a queen. It is similar to the bachelor. Funny huh? A 17 year old
prince that has never been in love, or had a crush has to pick 1 girl out of 17
beautiful ones to be his wife and rule the country. America happened to be one
of those girls. She was form a lower class but once the prince laid his eyes on
her, he knew he was in love. In this book she was one of the final girls to be
nominated to be queen. While the Selection was going on, lots of violence/
politics from northern and southern rebels kept the prince on his feet. From
the selection, to the countless deaths happening in society the prince must
juggle everything and find the next queen. A lot happens in this book and I don’t
want to spoil it. :)
I recommend this book to people who
enjoy romance and like watching the bachelor/bachelorette. It’s intense and has
many plot twists, like a guy from America’s past and the threats from the king. That
might sound confusing, but if want to know more, read the book! The series is a
great and the talent of the writer dragging the reader in tends to amaze me.
Cass has been able to use people’s emotions and write the books very well.
Official Book Trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVDfV7gCCFE
Thursday, November 13, 2014
Walk to Remember: Part 2
I am still reading A Walk to Remember and so far I am
enjoying it. After watching the trailer, I can predict lots of the characters
personalities. There are not some characters that are developed. But all the
characters develop in their own way. (Especially the main characters) I understand the character's thought and a little of there past.
After some time the book started to slow down and get in every small
detail. That style of writing is not what I can read. All of Nicholas Sparks Book’s,
are very detailed. This book however, was very different from the rest. It was
structured in only one of the characters perspective for multiple chapters in a row.
Usually Sparks alternates so you can understand both sides. Being a in guy’s
perspective for so long was very boring and blunt. He portrayed the guy
checking out girls’ majority of the time and describing there “body structure”.
I understand that, some guys think like that but I don’t think Sparks should
write in that perspective/ topic for a long time.
Even though, I didn’t really enjoy the book, I really want to see the
movie. Like I said before [in blog post 8], I watched the trailer and hope to enjoy the movie
better. I went onto YouTube, and found lots of scenes people enjoyed in the movie.
I particularly love the scene where he stands up for Jamie and is not afraid to
be seen with her in public. That was when they’re connection sparked.
The scene: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dso2Tfye2q4
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